Redo please

The position you apply for depends on your first impression when meeting the director of your position. from the moment you walk into view your at their mercy. The first impression can never be forgotten you can be known as the one who was nearly half an hour early, well groomed and confident or remembered as the person who walked in five minuets late with coffee stands on your shirt and out of breath. Most of the time you will not be given a second chance at a first impression, what is done is done and if you are granted with a second chance the memory of your first "oops" will still be there. The second time around you would have to do all you could to gain a new view on you. It all depends if any one is willing to give you a second thought though, how ever it is important to present yourself where you go as a respectable, responsible person.